Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work.
Our school-wide theme this year is 'In Our Backyard. Kia mau ki te tokanga nui a noho - there is no place like home.' Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work.
Hi Philly, I really like your background because it gives a clue about the tuff cone eruption you might be writing about. The poem you made it's very beautiful and unique. Blog ya later! ~Balqees🍄
Kia ora Philly, thank you for sharing your writing with us. You have done well to get the syllable count correct for your haiku. Do you enjoy writing poems or prefer story writing? Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Talofa Lava Philippa, thank you for sharing your work with us. You have the right count, 5-7-5 for your Haiku poem. My guess, your poem describes an eruption. Manuia le aso (Have a good day).
Hi Philly,
ReplyDeleteI really like your background because it gives a clue about the tuff cone eruption you might be writing about. The poem you made it's very beautiful and unique. Blog ya later!
~Balqees🍄
Kia ora Philly, thank you for sharing your writing with us. You have done well to get the syllable count correct for your haiku. Do you enjoy writing poems or prefer story writing?
ReplyDeleteKia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Talofa Lava Philippa, thank you for sharing your work with us. You have the right count, 5-7-5 for your Haiku poem. My guess, your poem describes an eruption. Manuia le aso (Have a good day).
ReplyDeleteKia ora Philly, I really enjoyed reading your haiku. The syllable count was perfect so you would have put a great deal of thought into it. Great work
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